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Old 03-31-2008, 12:56 AM
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Poetry: Is it bad to use commas in the middle of a line?

For example...

Rubik's cubes are fun, didn't you know?
Even when you solve it quite slow,

I don't know I just made it up but anyway, is it bad to have a comma in the middle of the line like I did after "fun"?
What about if it's rhyming couplets?
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