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Old 04-10-2008, 07:28 AM
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someone good at poetry that would please help gets 10 points?

I have to write a definition poem in LA class.
First is pain an emotion? Like I know its physically hurt but...
and I have this:
Pain is black.
Pain sounds like little kids crying when they fall and also adults crying when they loose
Someone.
Pain smells like the sickly clean smell of a hospital.
Pain tastes like
Pain feels like anything from a bruise to loosing someone close to you.


Can someone help me with the tastes like part?
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