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Old 04-18-2008, 02:06 AM
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I'm helping a friend write a story. Please critique!! Intro inside, thank you!!?

"Houses were made for people who are scared. I am not one of these people. Therefore, I do not live in a house. I do not lie in bed at night and stare at the ceiling. I do not eat my meals in a cramped room over a table, quietly asking the person next to me to pass the salt. I do not have a house, or a door, or a lock to secure myself behind the door, inside my house. I am Aurora and I am not such a person as this. I do not believe in fear, and I absolutely do not believe in hiding. I am Aurora and I have nothing to hide from."

wut do u think? please b honest.
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