Thread: I'm helping a friend write a story. Please critique!! Intro inside, thank you!!?
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Old 04-18-2008, 02:11 AM
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That is a very very very good intro. It has creative talent and paints the main characters feelings about people who have more very well. Continue your writing and post it on goodreads.com
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