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Well, I won't pass up the opportunity for judgment to passed on me!
To address your question concerning the knowledge and purpose of an unnamed object, I would suggest you read up on some philosophy of language.
What do I think of your poem? Meh. It's not the worst I've read but far from good. It's a bit choppy, and you're not e.e. cummings. So, start spelling correctly and use proper grammar. I have a difficult time taking it seriously otherwise. Best of luck on refining it!
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