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Old 04-27-2008, 06:56 PM
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If you want a iambic pentameter (penta for five), you cannot treat a word that has two syllables as having one syllable just to make it "match".

Moving away from the regular meter is something poets do. Still, for a homework that is supposed to make you think about the strict form of the sonnet, I would suggest you rephrase the line to stick to the rules.

"I long for you to send the healing rain", maybe?

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