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Old 04-29-2008, 09:01 AM
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ressee has a spectacular aura about
Is this poetry trully good or is it horrible?

In the city of a thousand thousand soulsI
have not yet found a mirror
I cannot see the reflection
Of myself in them
Is there no one like me?
In this cultural bowl
Am I connected only with the land itself?
Alone in a society of crowds
In a place of limited freedom
Crowds. Crowds. Crowds.
They have all found each other
But they have yet to find me.



Be completely honest...what do you think?
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