Thread: My new poem- "Awakening" - what do you think?
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Old 05-10-2008, 11:28 PM
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My new poem- "Awakening" - what do you think?
I thought it was good and has a good structure to it. The line "The voice spoke, soft as snow" I don't really like.
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