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Old 05-05-2008, 09:24 PM
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Proofread Please?

2nd sentence: teachers, not teacher4th sentence: Teachers, in the beginning of the school year, are forced to start preparing the students just to pass the TAKS and state standard goals.5th,6th sentences: should be would enforce, not will enforce7th sentence: should be would create, not will8th sentence is not a sentence. I would combine the 7th and 8th together.Remember, this should be in future tense (what you are going to do)
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