Thread: Please critique my poem to earn 10 points.?
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Old 05-16-2008, 03:12 AM
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Please critique my poem to earn 10 points.?
it doesnt really flow but it has good imagery.some of ur phrases are very good.a little more work and coherency would it improve it a lot.overall about a 7/10
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