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At night you hear banshees screams from the depths of the earth,Lucifer laughs from the his party in hell.he brings dark hope & rings the division belltakes away your bright heavenputs you under his spellno more summer dayswind blows in cool paintheres nothing to be gainedin this world thats insaneits unbearable torturefor my brain
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