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Old 05-16-2008, 01:39 AM
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tomorrow is my last day of h/s. any advice?

Your poem is good, but I would work on the rhythm. Try to make sure your syllables match. For instance, in a sonnet, every line is ten syllables long. One trick I use is to read what I've written out loud. When you hear it you mentally edit it. As for advice on graduating, enjoy the celebrations, you're an adult now! I know it's scary, but don't worry, there's not really any such thing as the "real world." Most people are just trying to get by and hoping they don't screw up. Congratulations!
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