| tomorrow is my last day of h/s. any advice?
A very nice piece and it does express your feelings well.I do feel that there are points of it where the sentence flow creates a wordiness.You may want to revisit some of your lines and edit for structure flow.As to advice as to what to do after leaving your long-term security...stay in school. Take your standard summer vacation off and think about what you wish to create for your future. Your life's path and future is now in your hands, and yes it is very scary. Educate yourself to all the positive possibilities. You may want to even look into some summer job internships.Relax, enjoy and have a safe summer vacation, for come September, College begins. Make your choices wisely, for mistakes made, are choices made.Enjoy your break,Sam
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