Thread: Is this an acceptable Haiku?
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Old 05-15-2008, 11:29 AM
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Is this an acceptable Haiku?
It's very weak.You are not painting a picture of nature, which is where the haiku is stronger.This is a senryu, you have the right. So, it does work in that genre.T
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