| What do you think of my speech? Please make comments and suggestion?
We are prepared; to step forward into high school and achieve using the skills and values we have been taught at Ocean City Intermediate School.No punctuation needed after prepare- you use this only when you are making a list. That would be more than 2 things and you only have 2 even though the word "and" is used twice.Check your use of commas! Submit it to the grammar checker on word and that should fix things.I think that the wording sounds great. It flows from point to point and stays on the subject well.
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