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Not very clear...what's going on in this poem?
It gives the impression of drama without actually letting the reader in on it.
So inept readers will nod their heads and pretend they get it, when they don't. As a writer, you have a responsibility to the reader to get a message across to him or her. Don't withold important information, don't be intentionally vague. Just write the story for me, for crissake!
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