plz correct...........?

[sweth3456]

hi plz correct any grammar mistakes in the following sentences............its urgent........i have to speak out these sentences,waiting for ur valuable suggestions......""I have received acceptance for admission in biology.I have already couriered bank statement and i20 form.Now I want to pay my tuition deposit."

[EzziMcMchick]

Sounds good to me, Id probably change "Now I want to" to "I now wish to"

[cloverlove]

""I have received acceptance for admission in biology.I have already couriered bank statement and i20 form.Now I want to pay my tuition deposit."They are absolutely correct!

[NeveronSunday]

"I have been accepted for admission into Biology. I have already sent my bank statement and the I20 form via courier. I am now ready to pay my tuition deposit."btw, "via" is pronounced vee-uh.Hope this helps!

[Orangekickin]

I have recently received acceptance for admission into Biology (Put Bio Class level here, such as Bio 101, 102, etc.). I have delivered my bank statement and the required i20 form. I would like to pay for my tuition deposit now please.-Sounds decent enough for me. I advise that you not over think or be nervous about trivial things like this though, just do it relaxed and forget about being anxious.

[Brownring2080]

While not wrong, as you are apparently joining an American University, you may like to polish up your English a bit with a spoken English course. I would have said the following in your place."I have received your confirmation of admission to the Biology course and have already sent my bank statement and the I 20 form by courier. I now wish to pay my tuition deposit". HAve a great time with your studies in the US.