I'm helping a friend write a story. Please critique!! Intro inside, thank you!!?

[You are You, I am Me]

"Houses were made for people who are scared. I am not one of these people. Therefore, I do not live in a house. I do not lie in bed at night and stare at the ceiling. I do not eat my meals in a cramped room over a table, quietly asking the person next to me to pass the salt. I do not have a house, or a door, or a lock to secure myself behind the door, inside my house. I am Aurora and I am not such a person as this. I do not believe in fear, and I absolutely do not believe in hiding. I am Aurora and I have nothing to hide from."

wut do u think? please b honest.

[SeinnaZzz]

That is a very very very good intro. It has creative talent and paints the main characters feelings about people who have more very well. Continue your writing and post it on goodreads.com

[c'est la vie]

Well, if this were 6th grade, or middle school level stuff -- I gotta say this is very unconventionally creative!

I really, really like your minimalist style of writing. It has a very cutting edge element to it. Good work!!!!!!