please Rate this original poem?

[trevorpoet0629]

At night you hear screams from the depths of the earth,Laughter from the misery of the party in hell.Too dark for heaven, brighter than the sun on the warmest summer day.Louder than the trains, quieter than the wind... the sound is unmistakable.Not screams of horror but horrific screams of miserable bliss,Not the infliction of unbearable pain but the infliction of nothing... far less bearable than painIf I was stuck in your kerosene drenched shoes would i burn in the pages of history or live in the immortal pressence of evil.

[nasaj816540]

You have ruined the english language, and i predict that in ten years the entire anglophonic world will be speaking mandarin chinese due to this crapheap. nice goin, fella.

[JR2126]

Stringing together a bunch of contradictory terms to describe jumbled , meaningless thoughts hardly qualifies as poetry.Inventing fuzzy little emotional, depressing, and dramatic phrases may lead to playing with one's sanity, and not necessarily to a blue ribbon.

[nemo0763]

Good always originality is something to be appreciated !So good of posting!And it's ur creation & noone has the status to critic ur poem!Always imagination has diff interpretations maybe nice for u nad not for others so do not mind sour answes if any!It's good!

[ValentinaG]

The writer obviously someone who enjoys wallowing misery. A real pessimist, one who has the choice of two evils and yet chooses both