is this a good thesis statement for my AP US History DBQ?

[amee]

Here's the prompt:
Documents A-H reveal some of the problems thatmany farmers in the late 19th century saw as threats to their way of life. Using the documents and your knowledge of the period, (a) explain the reasons for agrarian discontent AND (b) evaluate the validity of the farmers' complaints.

Here's my thesis statement:
Farmers’ valid complaints about America’s unfair money supply system and the corrupt democratic system unavoidably led to the solutions of free coinage of silver and a more democratic system that formed the Populist Party.

[Ardinus]

I think it's too wordy... work on being concise.

Kudos to actually writing something yourself instead of asking people to write it for you.