Grammar check pleaseeeee =) with a cherry on top?

[MatiasG]

On the day of May29,08 I stepped inside the NG meeting. From then I understood the purpose of being absent and how important it is to be in school to get an adequate education. As I listened to the various stories each teacher said it sank to me how I was not being very responsible and the lack of knowledge I had based on the attendance policy. I know next year I will be more mature about my education and I learned that the only reasons I can have an excused absence is if I am ill, there is a death in the family, a doctor’s or dentist’s appointment, an approved religious holiday or a Court appointment. I know that when I arrive back to school I have to bring a note 0-3 days after the absence between 6:45 AM and 7:15 AM. I grasp the concept that missing school means getting behind and causing me to have a lower GPA. Furthermore, I apprehended that if I do not assist school it will affect my future because I will not get into a good college, I might end up working in a minimum wage job and regret not going to school where I could have received a free education while I was young and could have been able to have the time and liberty to study. Last but certainly not least, after ten cumulative absences if I do not bring admits I will get an NG and this will change my outstanding GPA drastically!

[tay9806]

On the day of May 29,2008 I stepped inside the N,G meeting. From then, I understood the purpose of being absent and how important it is to be in school to get an adequate education. As I listened to the various stories each teacher said, it sank in that I was not being very responsible and the lack of knowledge I had based on the attendance policy. I know next year I will be more mature about my education. I learned that the only reasons I can have an excused absence is if I am ill, there is a death in the family, a doctor’s or dentist’s appointment, an approved religious holiday or a Court appointment. I know that when I arrive back to school, I have to bring a note 0-3 days after the absence between 6:45 AM and 7:15 AM. I grasp the concept that missing school means getting behind and causing me to have a lower GPA. Furthermore, I apprehended that if I do not assist school it will affect my future because I will not get into a good college, I may end up working in a minimum wage job and regret not going to school when I could have received a free education while I was young and could have been able to have the time and liberty to study. Last but certainly not least, after ten cumulative absences if I do not bring admits I will get an N.G and this will change my outstanding GPA drastically!

[KristenB]

On the day of May 29, 2008, I stepped inside the NG <don't abbreviate> meeting. From then I understood the purpose of being absent and how important it is to be in school to get an adequate education. As I listened to the various stories each teacher said, <I realized> how I was not being very responsible and the lack of knowledge I had <about the> attendance policy. I know next year I will be more mature about my education. <> I learned that the only reasons I can have an excused absence is if I am ill, there is a death in the family, <I have> a doctor’s or dentist’s appointment, <there is> an approved religious holiday, or I have a Court appointment. I know that when I arrive back to school I have to bring a note 0-3 days after the absence between 6:45 AM and 7:15 AM. I grasp the concept that missing school means getting behind and causing me to have a lower GPA. Furthermore, I apprehended that if I do not assist <attend?>school it will affect my future because I will not get into a good college, and I might end up working in a minimum wage job regret<ting> not going to school where I could have received a free education while I was young. <I> could have been able to have the time and liberty to study. Last but certainly not least, after ten cumulative absences if I do not bring admits, I will get an NG and this will change my outstanding GPA drastically.