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[AGRATHA S]

Diwali is one of the most important hindu festivals celebrated in India.it’s most Important indias holiday..It is celebrated on the darkest night of the year,Diwali is also the start of the New Year for many communities in India..Diwali is the most popular festival of North India This is history of ramyan The festival it’s comes to the end of the October or beginning of the november. It’s a five days celebration holiday in India.Diwali celebrates to the Lord Rama and his wife Sita and brother Lakshmana returned to their Kingdom Ayodhya after 14 years of exile. People of Ayodhya welcomed them with lighted oil lamps.ram is our main character He's actually god. this day is the Indian peoples special day. The south Indian people has known this day is narakasura killed day because, lord Krishna killed narakasura and he returned home in the early morning.
the people called naraka chaturdasi day but they are celebrating to diwali.Every people happy and celebrated to this day.

[kitty]

Diwali is one of the most important hindu festivals celebrated in India. It’s India's most Important holiday. It is celebrated on the darkest night of the year, Diwali is also the start of the New Year for many communities in India.Diwali is the most popular festival of North India it is the history of Ramyan. The festival comes to the end of October or beginning of the November. It’s a five day celebration in India. Diwali celebrates the Lord Rama and his wife Sita and brother Lakshmana returnng to their Kingdom Ayodhya after 14 years of exile. People of Ayodhya welcomed them with lighted oil lamps. Rama is our main character, he's actually a god. This day is the Indian people's special day. The south Indian people know this day as the day narakasura was killed because lord Krishna killed narakasura and he returned home in the early morning.
the people called naraka chaturdasi day but they are celebrating to diwali.Every people happy and celebrated to this day.

[Hoog Lee]

Diwali is one of the most important of all Hindu festivals celebrated in India. Its the most important Indian Holiday.
Diwali is celebrated on the darkest night of the year. It is also the start of the New Year for many communities in India. The most popular festival in North India .

It is connected with the history of Ramayana. The festival ends around the end of October and the beginning of November.
Diwali is a five day celebration in India and celebrates the return of Lord Rama, his wife Sita and brother Lakshmana to their kingdom Ayodhya after 14 years of exile. People of Ayodha welcomed them with lighted oil lamps.
Ram is our main character and is the incarnation of Lord Vishnu. This day is special for the Indians.

The South Indians call this day Naraka Chaturdashi. On this day, Lord Krishna killed Naraksura and returned home in the early morning.
It is Diwali morning.

[dooleys18]

Diwali is one of the most important hindu festivals celebrated in india, its the most important indian holiday. Diwali is celebrated on the darkest night of the year and is also the start of the New Year for many communities in india. It is the most popular festival in North Indica and is the history of ramyan. The festival ends around the end of October start of November. Diwali is a five day celebration in India and celebrates the return of Lord Rama, his wife Sita and brother Lakshmana to thier kingdom Ayodhya after 14 years of exile. People of Ayodha welcomed them with lighted oil lamps. Ram is our main character and is god. This day is the Indian peoples specail day. The south indian people know this day as the day Naraksura was killed because, Lord Krishan killed Naraksura and returned home in the early morning

The day is called Naraka Chaturdais Day but they are in fact celebrating dicali. Every person is happy when celebrating this day.

[dooleys18]

Diwali is one of the most important hindu festivals celebrated in india, its the most important indian holiday. Diwali is celebrated on the darkest night of the year and is also the start of the New Year for many communities in india. It is the most popular festival in North Indica and is the history of ramyan. The festival ends around the end of October start of November. Diwali is a five day celebration in India and celebrates the return of Lord Rama, his wife Sita and brother Lakshmana to thier kingdom Ayodhya after 14 years of exile. People of Ayodha welcomed them with lighted oil lamps. Ram is our main character and is god. This day is the Indian peoples specail day. The south indian people know this day as the day Naraksura was killed because, Lord Krishan killed Naraksura and returned home in the early morning

The day is called Naraka Chaturdais Day but they are in fact celebrating dicali. Every person is happy when celebrating this day.

[kchick8080]

Diwali is one of the most important Hindu festivals celebrated in India, celebrated on the darkest night of the year at end of October or beginning of November. Diwali is also the start of the New Year for many communities in India and it is the most popular festival of North India.
Celebrations last for 5 days. Diwali celebrates the Lord Rama, his wife Sita and brother Lakshmana returning to their Kingdom Ayodhya after 14 years of exile. People of Ayodhya welcomed them with lighted oil lamps. Ram is our main character, He's actually God. This day is the Indian peoples special day. The south Indian people celebrate Diwali too, this was the day lord Krishna killed narakasura. They also call it naraka chaturdasi day but they are also celebrating Diwali.