Homework Questions, Im not EXPECTING answers!!! I need help Quick! =/?

[kass_fchsbabe_2007]

I had an essay I had to write, and Im finally threw with it, its due within (2days). I have it typed up, but I was wondering if someone else could read it, and tell me how they think it is, or what I need to change or add.

I cannot post it on here tho, I believe it is to long, so if you would let me have your email, that would work wonders!!

Thanks for all the help, & I appericate it tons.

=)