I'm foreigner who is studying English as a second language.?

[Jasmine]

p.94 : The writing Process - Story
-There was a girl who wants to be pretty. Her name was Maria. but, she always thought she wasn't pretty at all.
She decided to do her best until the charming prince appeared. Most of all, she loved herself. and, she kept her body clean, and worked out every morning.
One day, a boy appeared to her who was so handsome, smart, and, good-looking. He was really kind and loved her so much.
Finally, they fell in love with each other, so, they got married and they all lived happily ever after.

p.95
-First,roll over the bowling ball to bring down lots of pins.
-Then, the pins are fallen down.
-It sounds a little loud in here.

p.96
-Mrs.Sarah was in her way to home. The weather was really sunny. She was about to across the street, suddenly, It started to rain violently.
Mrs.Sarah took out a black umbrella from her hand-back. She put up an umbrella.
Then,She could go home without wetting. She thought an umberella was very useful.

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