French help!?

[natt]

Please help me only if you are fluent!

okay so in my french class we have to do a project where we do a commercial for a franc a phone (sp?) country, like an island.

so How would I say:

Are you over worked?
Tried?
Cold?

Then come to __(fill in resort name here)__ !

Where you can Relax..
Have family fun..
and Admire the scenery!
only $215 american/ canadian dollars a night
for memories for a life time.


I know that It sounds like your doing my work for me
but trust me... your not.
& keep it in the preasent tense.
sorry for the mis-spelling
typing fast

(NO translators.. they dont conjugate... thats a big deal!
NO TRANSLATORS)
I live in Nashville!

[holly]

Êtes-vous surmené? Fatigué? Froid?

Alors, allez à ___________

C'est pour relaxer, s'amuser avec la famille, et d'admirer le paysage!

Il faut simplement $215 dollaires américaine par nuit pour acheter les mémoires qui vont durer tout la vie!

[niki]

Are you over worked?
Tried?
Cold?

Etes vous Creve ?
Fatigue ?
Avez vous froid ?

Was too lazy to do the rest !

[green_meklar]

>okay so in my french class we have to do a project where we do a commercial for a franc a phone (sp?) country, like an island.

It's spelled 'francophone'. One word.

>so How would I say:
>Are you over worked?
>Tried?
>Cold?
>Then come to __(fill in resort name here)__ !
>Where you can Relax..
>Have family fun..
>and Admire the scenery!
>only $215 american/ canadian dollars a night
>for memories for a life time.

I assume that by 'tried' you mean 'tired'. Here's my translation:

***

Êtes-vous surmené?
Fatigué?
Froid?
Alors venez à [mettre le nom de la complexe hôtelier ici]!
Ici vous pouvez vous détendre, vous amuser avec votre famille, et admirer le paysage! Seulement $215 américain/canadien par nuit pour les mémoires pour toute la vie.

***

Note that your writing is a little odd in places to begin with (for example, using 'for' twice in a row in your last line is not an advisable thing for an advertiser to do, it would sound better if you reworded it), so my translation can only achieve so much quality anyway. I'm also not a native speaker so I may be wrong on some words. In addition, I used the male forms of 'surmené', 'fatigué' and 'froid', so if you want to use the female versions that's up to you.

For future reference, here's an excellent online dictionary (NOT an automatic translator) that can convert between french and english words:
http://www.wordreference.com/

[hot_chocolate6960]

Avez-vous travaillé trop?
Fatigué?
Froid?

Venez __ (inscrire le nom de recourir ici) __!

Où vous pourrez vous relaxer ..
amusez- vous en famille ..
Et admirer le paysage!
Seulement 215 dollars américains / canadiens dollars la nuit
Pour les souvenirs d'une vie.

[safiyah]

if u type conjugate in google there will be places where they can conjugate ur words for u. thats what i use

[Rika]

I know this isn't going to be much help but you might want to think about heading over to Yahoo Answers France or whatever it's called. Someone there might know English....probably does and they could probably help you better than Yahoo Answers US.

[Sweethang]

my second language is french so i wish that im helpful.

est ce que vous avez travailler trop beaucoup, vous etes fatiguer? froid?

votre problem serai resoudre venez a ( u pick a resortname i sujjest relaxation)

ici vous pouvez vous relaxez, avoir plein d'amusement avec votre famile, vous pouvez admirer la scenerie. c'est seulement 215$ american/ canadian chaque nuit. sa serai une souvenir de votre vie. alors que ce que vous attender venez a ( resords name)

hey wish i could help, i was typing fast so srry if i made any spelling error, im preety sure my grammer was good. i also added a couple of extra stuff to make it funky n sofisticated. wish i was help

[bisous doux ?]

use wordreference.com
everything you want to say will be on there and they have forums as well so you can ask native speakers on that site.

[HeartGlass]

hiii im from quebec, im really glad to help you :P

---> Êtes-vous surchargé de travail?
Épuisé?
Froid?

Alors venez à (resort name)!

Là où vous pouvez relaxer...
Passer du bon temps en famille...
Et admirer le paysage!
seulement 215$ dollars américains/canadiens pour une nuit
pour des souvenirs qui dureront toute une vie<----

hoped i helped you! where do u live??