please tell what do u think about my poetry? is it a standard one?

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please tell what do u think about my poetry? is it a standard one?

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04-01-2008, 08:15 AM

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please tell what do u think about my poetry? is it a standard one?

what my heart wants........
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Amidst the misery, sorrow and darkness around us,
To float in the blue sky my heart wants.
My heart craves for joy and happiness
my heart wants to sing in the tune of vastness.
My heart wants to be green with sprouting leaves,
my heart wants to be pure with rising sunrays,
my heart wants to feel the touch of the eternal beauty;
my heart wants to play in the garden of almighty!

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