whatchu think bout my poetry? read plz?

[ghetto fabolous]

how can one day bring so much pain in my life
in 24 hours the years of pain you had replays in my head
thinking bout all the days we shared, wish i could go back in time and relive all the things we did
it hurt me so much to watch you suffer i would do anything to have back my beautiful mother
i would give my own life just to know that you'd be aight
they all thought that you would get caught up in the streets of l.a
but u conquered it mommy - you had goals you wanted to achieve
you wanted to make a betta life for me not going through the same hard times you delt wit
but this is the worst for me i lost you to some disease
it wasnt your time to go.. no matter what they say it wasnt your time to go
now im sitting here wondering why they had to take you from me but i got hopes. .i got hopes and dreams hoping they'll be as good as the things you've achieved.
April 3 1960 - May 11 2006

and i know my poetry dont really rhyme and thats cuz i dont really like makin em ryhme. .enjoy!