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[Nick S]

Awake

The chosen ones sleep
In there silence so deep
Hoping for joy and
Wishing to speak
Yearning for the day
When they won't be pushed aside
Yearning for the day
When they won't have to hide
Waiting for someone to give them a sign
Waiting for someone to step across the line
The messenger comes and gives them the key
He breaks off there chains and sets them all free
They have finally found there voice strong and bold
Someone has finally awoken there souls

[Leigha Bella]

i like it allot what is it for ?

[isitmaybecouldbe]

It seems a resolution but it's such a morbid but excellent expression