Poetry, For My Love?

astano · #1 (**permalink**) 04-06-2008, 03:32 AM

Down To Fate, Astano

Im willing to wait
For the actions of fate
It bought us together
So you know it would
Never, separate it’s own creation
I could wait forever
For you anything
Just to hear you sing
Because, once I realised
Opened my eyes
Love is one big surprise

Let me know what you think :P
(Only 16 by the way, I just love to rhyme)
Made that in what 5 minutes. Thanks all

Desiness-on- Ice · #2 (**permalink**) 04-06-2008, 03:33 AM

Never, separate it’s own creation

that is so good! i luv it. i posted a poem too. check it out.
PS only 14

GaBBz · #3 (**permalink**) 04-06-2008, 03:33 AM

It was lovley! I like to ryhme too!
Keep it up! =D
?

prettygirl · #4 (**permalink**) 04-06-2008, 03:33 AM

awwww you made that in 5 min.
impressive
good job hun
i really like it.. a lot a lot
keep up the good work

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