Poetry book?!?!?

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ok im writing a poetry book for school and i need to write a free verse. And i was wondering if what i have so far is ok. Now one thing i should tell u is that im not very good at poetry and we just started it in class.

title: Grandma's Daja vu
she leaves
to a continent far
away
she'll board
the plane
take a nap
and try to
understand
what the
attendant is trying
to say
She'll get out of the air plane
and go to the next
do it again
just like daja vu
She'll get
out one more time
go on a bus
look out the
window
and pull up her
leg rest, to sleep until
she gets there
when finnally she
arrives, She''ll take a
car ride and go
home.
To sleep
again

now can you tell me if im missing a , or a . Also i must have a similie or a metaphor can you tell me if theres one in there. please answer this!