im stuck with poetry??

[Jj C]

for my school i have to write a poetry on what i wish to be free from...
i already got the idea of what i wish to be free from but i just dont know how to put it out and how to write it...

my first line of my poem is "i want to be free from homework and test"

what do i write next....

it doesnt have to rhyme.
it was good kibadoggy...its not crap..
thankx for your help..

[nancye27]

"i want to be free from homework and tests"
they are the things that cause me most stress

[forbidden]

I want to be free from this homework and test.
Take off theses shackles, I'll do my best.
Free me from the bondage of writing this.
So I can go back to the things I miss.
lol.....Don't really know what your going for.
Good luck

[kibadoggy]

ok her ei go with my lame attempt to help u

to be rid of something,is to be rid of everypart, to be rid of what u desire,u must remove it all,

i wish for the peril of homework,it plagues my body and soul,but developes my mind,

must i carry on with somethign ,thats gd but bad,why must it be gd forme? why must i have it, scool, itsnt it enought with its ways of torture,that in some minds is good for us,

who created uch pity on our undeveloped minds,who forced this world to need such qualifications ?


this i will discover one day,this i will give up .



was that gd enough? sorry if its crap ............lol