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04-10-2008, 01:50 AM

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new to poetry rate my poem please.?

Letting my heart bleed out.

As soothing words come pooring out,
The angered splurs seem to sprout.
The river of pain, of simple emotion,
The stream that drains my thoughts will run.

The frustrations of the day,
Just seem to melt away.
The anger, pain, and sad,
The happy, laughing, and mad.

They flow down my veins
From my pulsing brain
Provoking and evoking
My heart to start to sing

Simple memories,
Floating across the seas
Of my soul's inside
Where my true heart does hide.

I just turned 15 and I haven't been writing for long... on a 1-10 scale plz!!

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