good writer?-poetry?

[ihartstewie!]

Life; loving yet hateful
Joy; gleeful yet smug
Rich; fortunate yet struggle
Articles; grand yet a drug

Death; poignant yet pleasure
Woe; despondency yet regard
Poor; destitute yet a treasure
Charitable; ostentatious yet marred
only 13 b nice but b truthful!

[joseph rose carpenter]

Closer to philosophy than poetry. Well done.

peace and love

[chucklesthefirst]

i think you have good thoughts, however with practice your poetry will grow into a better structure. maybe you should read more poetry and get a feel of it first. also maybe write your thoughts into sentences and review it into a poem.

I'm a creative writing student and i have problems with poetry, i can't explain exactly what i want to express, i find it a difficult thing to do.

i would also suggest that you make it harder for the reader to interpret what you are trying to say. if you are really interested in poetry i would say this is the best way to go, but you are making a good start.