if poetry is like the language we use every where?

[puniwish]

do you not know what some thing does if itdoesn't have a name on it ,. oh well ,., i will judge your character by what you say about this poem ,., so try and hurt my feelings thanks >
a little too late
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time too rate
something part of your fate
sorry for the wait
and heres another mate
mate for the ryme
understood this time
seven
heaven
evil sounds so fun
owe if god could make me the one
and if this is a little understood
i knew you could
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andy by the way was it ANY good
tell me every thought you should