poetry...are they ok? rate them 1-10!! =)?

[Lexi L]

TELL ME IF HOW U LIKE THEM ALL

1)Love.


Do you know how much it hurt when you left me?
My love life is over
Because of you.
I won’t love again.
Think of that when you’re with her.
Think of how much you have hurt me in my life.
Then hopefully, you’ll learn.

Heres another peom
2)GONE
It hurts so much inside.
Knowing that youre gone.
I can't stand knowing you have left.
This world is nothing without you.
I hear your name and cry.
Just knowing youre gone.

and one more.
3)JESUS
I have a feeling in my heart.
I know its Jesus loving me.
My heart is complete with Jesus.
He's the father of everyone.
And I love him.
Thank you, Jesus Christ.

[MiZZ ??LLI?ii?SZ]

I love poetry and i love reading it. You have potential. :-D

I would give them all 8/10

P.s Your and my avatars are alike lol

[CG- LUSCIOUS LESBIAN LIPS]

1. 3
2. 4
3. 2

First of all, AT LEAST when you write a poem pay attention to spelling.
Secondly, you repeat words over and over again.
Thirdly, the few rhymes you have are horrible.

But I appreciate that you tried it. You just need to work a lot more on them. Read poetry and you'll improve.

[martamendez57]

1.10
2.10
3.10
awesome!

[Elizabeth]

i like them all
1.6
2.5
3.6 awesome story line but its kinda dry

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3
6
6
Nice

[Jordi L]

1) 10
2) 10
3) 10

i write poems 2...do u wanna hear my best poem?

Forgotten Love

I desire his luv
He has stolen my heart
Tis Secrets tears and lies that were tearing us apart
he said he loved me not 2 long ago
but for our last date
he did not show
i have forgotten him or so i thought
he is in my dreams everynight
but in there i am lost
i have not yet forgiven him
but alas i dont care
i am still in love with him
he is still my pookie bear

what do u think?