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| if poetry is like the language we use every where? do you not know what some thing does if itdoesn't have a name on it ,. oh well ,., i will judge your character by what you say about this poem ,., so try and hurt my feelings thanks > a little too late --------------------- time too rate something part of your fate sorry for the wait and heres another mate mate for the ryme understood this time seven heaven evil sounds so fun owe if god could make me the one and if this is a little understood i knew you could -------------------------- andy by the way was it ANY good tell me every thought you should |
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| Well, I won't pass up the opportunity for judgment to passed on me! To address your question concerning the knowledge and purpose of an unnamed object, I would suggest you read up on some philosophy of language. What do I think of your poem? Meh. It's not the worst I've read but far from good. It's a bit choppy, and you're not e.e. cummings. So, start spelling correctly and use proper grammar. I have a difficult time taking it seriously otherwise. Best of luck on refining it! |
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