Oh joy, more poetry?

[advice out the wazoo!]

Alright. I know that long questions tend to put people off, but:

I consider myself a decent poet for my age. But without someone else's opinion, it is impossible to distinguish between real talent and unsolicited pride. I guess the only reason I'm saying this is because it seems haughty to post poetry online, like only the highest of cyber-praise is good enough for me.

Wow. Disregard the pointlessness of the rant above. I'm really only asking this question so I can receive HONEST feedback-- if you hate my poetry, please just say so and tell me what I can improve. Um, thanks.

For the Inside of Your Pockets (IV)

in the end,
your fingers and my lazy handwriting will meet
here, in the negative imprint of your palms,
this space found between spare change
and paperclips and broken pencils,
this quiet place where all things softly converge.

Please, please be honest. I know that this isn't the strongest piece and I would really like to improve it.

[Chop chop chop HuH?]

i dont no nuffin bout poetry n i dont really no what yaws ment

check out mine yo

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