Is this poetry trully good or is it horrible?

[ressee]

In the city of a thousand thousand soulsI
have not yet found a mirror
I cannot see the reflection
Of myself in them
Is there no one like me?
In this cultural bowl
Am I connected only with the land itself?
Alone in a society of crowds
In a place of limited freedom
Crowds. Crowds. Crowds.
They have all found each other
But they have yet to find me.



Be completely honest...what do you think?

[jenny S]

it is really great but i want to give you some pointers. At the very beginning i dont like the "thousand thousand" just change it to a thousand. and the "I" int he first line should be in the second line at the beginning. Other than that it is aweseome. It really is. You are a very good poet. this poem has meaning for everyone and not just the writer.