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| Poetry From Poems to Shakespearen English. Show some of yours. |
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| Another shot at amateur poetry your comment please? TWO PRECIOUS GEMS Blessed with twin priceless gems be I Beautfying my face embedded two my eye These valuables will never I part pots of Gold Protecting ,sacrificing entire wealth be even sold What beautiful treasure wonderful gift of sight Presented to man from his Creator All Might Gratitude not to Him is mankind’s pet disdain Pleas by Prophet’s on deaf-ears oft fall in vain Winess how we summer bloom roses red, If not for two pearls that emit light shed Children growth joy sans darkness be, Pray visual pleasures be for lifes eternity |
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| Thread | Thread Starter | Forum | Replies | Last Post |
| Please Comment on my Poetry? | aqquracy | Poetry | 0 | 04-08-2008 09:00 PM |
| Comment on Poetry? | Nick S | Poetry | 2 | 04-05-2008 03:57 PM |
| Comment on poetry? | Nick S | Poetry | 5 | 04-03-2008 02:56 PM |
| where is a good place to go 4 amateur poetry or comedy? | Just*Talkin | Poetry | 1 | 04-02-2008 12:20 AM |
| Amateur poetry by me your views? | colin | Poetry | 3 | 02-23-2008 06:09 PM |