Prepare yourself for crappy poetry.. share an opinon?

[*gasp*]

Okay, well, I kinda wanted to put this in my blog, but I wanted to get some opinions first.
I wrote it a while ago, because I'm one of those dorks that feels the need to write every now and again.
Here it goes..
Be nice? lol

Silent tokens of emotion,
Withdrawn infinitely.
The vibrant colors of his soul,
Forever with me.
His handwriting emblazoned everywhere,
Throughout the inner and outer reaches of myself.
The feeling of him,
Lingering on my fingertips.
The doodles from my pencil tip,
The thoughts bouncing through me,
The burns I wear from fragile life,
And the outline of my hope.
He is the storm cloud separating my eyes from the sun,
Yet the light gleaming from the darkened doorway.
The hopeful hours spent waiting,
Are never fulfilled.
The obvious passion felt,
Dim and never thriving,
But painfully present.
The subtle sweetness of his smile,
Of his eyes on mine.
These dark and damp eyes,
They are fully experienced,
Always hopeless,
But never broken.
Just for clarification I'm a girl. =D