Is this good poetry?

[donovan hammond]

I wrote this poem today in math class. Tell me what you think of it.

When you say I Love You

When you say I love you
I cry like a bird
Who flies to his nest
And cries like a bird.

When you say I love you
I go in my room
and think about you
And I am blue.

I think about you in the morning
I think about you in the afternoon
You're like a pretty diamond
I found in mid-June.

You're pretty like the stars
And you're pretty like the sky
Like a car that goes *beep beep!*
When it drives down the street


So...
What do you think?