Do you like my poetry?(girl who I answered to come here)?

[Mary R]

I am a poetry fanatic... so I accually attempted to write a poem and no just read them. Please post if you know about poetry. It doesn't have a rhyme scheme, it's free verse but it does have a rhythm so... work with me. Also tell me the parts you like and the parts you don't. Here it is.

''Empty Vase"
Bring me
An empty vase
To pour my heart into
For I have loved and lost and lived
And now I think I'm through
I hoped to god
That I would shine
For days and days apart
And now as I gaze
So back very far, I see it was all in vain
For the pain I feel
Will not recead
Until I'm clear at heart
i'm not me. i'm really u .
uh... I think your crazy...
''I'' wrote this poem 2 weeks ago in literature class
you don't know what your talking about ...
but im glad you think its good enough to be published

[i'm not me. i'm really u]

um, i'm not trying to acuse of anything, but i swear i've read that befoe. it's either overly cliche or copied.... sorry

[sharon j]

i like it.