judge my poetry?! ^_^ 15, female, inexperienced.?

[Xandria C]

You're currently dead, you're gone to me now.
You manage to tell me without voice or sound.
These wandering thoughts are still vibrantly moving,
I see you on walls like pictures in a movie.
You told me "too late," I go farther than that,
I limped up to you to tell you that that's it.

You blew it.
You crushed it.
You balanced it,
but then you tripped.

You kissed my lips tender; it dried up with our past,
Our remains are but sand in cruel time's hourglass.
I opened my heart and you threw it in ashes.
I opened my soul; you laid it in the casket.
I was buried alive by you, my almost lover,
Break my spirit, remember those words you uttered..

You came by it honestly, that must be the case,
I see it so clear now, trapped in the static of your face.
I still breathe inside you,
make you alive to me again,
even though you are currently dead.
constructive critism appreciated!
thank you.