I am Nothing... (freestyle poetry) thoughts?

[xambrau]

I am Nothing,

Nothing is Nothing
something comes from Nothing –
choice is given
freedom is only partial --
revolt against Nothing
you fool still stand --
Stoop to your idols I warn!
Plead for your life
wish a disease of immunity --
they answer than Nothing can stop you
they don’t, then by the blades of Nothing
catalyst to irreversible; awaken to Nothing --
to suffer is no demise
to feel the wrath of Nothing – ah, that is Divine --
Your end is in My beginning
Guests of naked souls, celebrate!
Unite to Nothing and, your host - death
For after the host, Nothing is left to face

any thoughts? Thank you.

[Melissa]

I like B+

[Look what I can do...]

There are some inferences to loneliness as Nothing.
When I replace the word "nothing" with "everything,"
the poem has a clearer meaning.
But you putting "nothing" there, makes me the reader uncomfortable and I have to juxtapose images of real nothing with your counter-descriptive words.

How bad can the wrath of nothing be?
And, awaken to nothing? blah.
"Awaken to everything," now that's something.