whats your opinion on my poetry is it good p.s its not all lovey dovey stuff?

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poem 1
I pull the fire
from within
the blasts satisfies
my angry tension
hatred and fear
my life is a fire
with sparks flying
every which way
i cant escape the fire
the flames enclose me
until i burn in a chamber of hell

poem2
life seems nothing
Nothing to hold near
Everything to fear
Friends seem to be there
But when you need them
They seem to disappear
Family seems to care
But when you need to cry
They are found nowhere
Love acts so kind
When you’ve found it
It stabs you from behind
life lets you down
Lets you drown
When no one comes to spare
You’re the one
Who will disappear
But no one seems to care

poem3
"Bleed it out,"
Pain whispers
The breath of pain
Sends shivers
Down my spine
My hand tremors
Soul shakes
Sharp pierces skin
Deeper and deeper
Scarlet streams
Rapid rush, red gush
Bleed out the pain
whsipers the pain