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Old 03-20-2008, 01:12 AM
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How do I add a good Hyperbole and Symbolism to my Poetry?

I have this much of my poem so far and I need to add about 10 more lines and within the I need to use Symbolism and Hyperboles and if possible I should also use Paradox and Onomatopoeia but they are not required...

The poem is free verse, not well written cause I suck, and it only has the beginning stanza and 2 ending stanzas
So if you could help me let me know what I could use in the middle there that includes Hyperbole and Symbolism

Perfection

A land of milk and honey
More beautiful than Aphrodite herself
A haven for the weary
A haven for the distressed
A haven for the wounded








The cradle is heaven
The sheets are as soft as clouds
The pillow smells of roses
They mend my wounds
They give me comfort

The cradle dances back and forth
It sways me as I slowly slip into sleep
Mending my malicious mind
My sight slowly disappearing
Like a setting sun
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