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| what kind of poetry is this consider?
i just wrote this and it may not be that great but i wanted to know if this would be considered as free verse. i was thinking about entering it into a poetry competition it's been months that i've felt felt for a person with no feeling i bow my head with shame ashamed of this unbalance while my stomach is expanding and the seasons are slowly changing i become spiritless my heart becomes angry it shatters within me and i cry my tears fall and they take my love with them plopping beneath my feet as i pace the room the sun is shining but my face does not Brett2010...um yeaaaah. thanx for the positive feedback and yes i should take the second felt out how about diminishing..disappearing...dying? |
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