do you write poetry??

[Britt]

do you write poems? and if you do... can you show me one of them? i love to read poetry from other people. here is one of my latest ones.

“Be As You Are”
Brittany Evanko

When I close my eyes I see that perfect place.
Where I am out of sight without a trace
It might be on the crashing waves of the ocean
With each wave crashing with such emotion

The oceans’ seas have many different faces.
I always wanted to be in one of those places
To live somewhere that I can lay in the grass.
The sun sets, it is like everything is shimmering with glass.

When the sun sets with colors of pink, orange, and yellow
I want to go where everything can be mellow.
No fighting, just peaceful surroundings, gazing at the stars.
Not needing to be anyone else, just to be as you are.

I want to have someone there with me to enjoy
One who will be there for me, not destroy.
Living life for all it is worth and much more.
I will finally feel like I did years before.

[elyslund]

Yes, writing poetry is fun, peaceful, and can be 'hair-tearing time'!
Your poem has very good, developed images and place in time. If you wish, make it a bit 'tighter' by taking out some words, that really aren't necessary to your meaning here.
You're GOOD! Certain of that one!