just wrote a love song (honest opinion please)?

[armiralthirdside]

its called midnight star


scratch
and bite
and claw your way
inside of me

kick
and fight
draw your battle lines
in the sand

submit me to your command x 2

burn
like the fire
like the embers
that blaze in your eyes

you rise
like the sun
you could never deny
what you are

the midnight star

scream out the name of your lover
from the depths of the gathering storm
let the lightning and thunder surround you
grasp the rose by the thorn

breathe
be still
and whisper to me in the dark

sleep
and dream
you could never be less
than you are

my morning star



sorry if this ruins the song but essentially the song is about sex
the gathering storm is her orgasm

please for the love of god dont ask what inspired this

[rockergirl1177]

Okay first thing:

*it was kinda cool but if ur goona talk about sex be more open because at first i had NO idea what u were talking about