opinion on lyrics I wrote?

theanswernator · #1 (**permalink**) 02-20-2008, 03:55 PM

Can you tell me what you think of these lyrics I wrote - link here: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2477626/1/Glass_Coffin

They are graphic and possibly disturbing, in the style of Cannibal Corpse - just an advance warning.

daz · #2 (**permalink**) 02-20-2008, 04:41 PM

Yeah they sound good.But how does the tempo go?

mizunderstood · #3 (**permalink**) 02-20-2008, 11:29 PM

Personally I think they are beautiful.
"How easily we forget
What death truly is
Hidden from us by our attempts to sanitize it
Embalming, preservation of the corpse
All to protect us from the truth"
Call me demented, but I think that's great stuff.

THE MAN · #4 (**permalink**) 02-20-2008, 11:59 PM

They where gross but it would make a good screamo song.

liz t · #5 (**permalink**) 02-21-2008, 01:22 PM

who are you trying to put to sleep?
haha
j/k
I liked it

notorious b.i.gabby · #6 (**permalink**) 02-21-2008, 01:54 PM

Hahah. Yeah, I agree with 'The Man.'

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